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Published: Jun 20, 2013

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Who made up all the rules?
We follow them like fools...
Believe them to be true,
Don't care to think them through...

And I'm sorry, so sorry,
I'm sorry it's like this,
I'm sorry, so sorry,
I'm sorry we do this...

And it's ironic too,
'Cause what we tend to do
Is act on what they say,
And then it is that way...

And I'm sorry, so sorry,
I'm sorry it's like this,
I'm sorry, so sorry,
I'm sorry we do this...

Who are they?
Where are they?
How can they possibly know all this?
Who are they?
Where are they?
How can they possibly know all this?

Do you see what I see?
Why do we live like this?
Is it because it's true,
That ignorance is bliss?

Who are they?
Where are they?
How do they know all this?
And I'm sorry, so sorry,
I'm sorry it's like this...

Do you see what I see?
Why do we live like this?
Is it because it's true,
That ignorance is bliss?

And who are they?
Where are they?
How can they know all this?
And I'm sorry, so sorry,
I'm sorry we do this...

So, do you think about two hours of non-continuous work paid off?
I think it did.
This is one of the slightly main characters of my story, The Six Saviors. Her name is DB (short for "Disturbia"), and she also doubles as my Halloween OC. xD
When she was young, DB was driven from her Tribe for being friends with a dog - a act that, under the law of her Tribe, was considered punishable. She moved to Seth's Kingdom, where she found that Seth was trying to use her "powers of persuasion" to get more animals to join his side.
She left soon after this and took up residence in a forest in the very far north, outside the Northern Frontier Village. She named her small forest the "Time Riddle", where she could waste time telling riddles to passer-bys, not letting them go through until they had solved enough of her riddles to make her happy.
And, dear Warrior fans, don't you dare comment saying that's Hollyleaf. 'Cause it ain't. owo;

_{Art and character belong to me.
Do not use, trace, render, or re-post.
"They" - Jem}

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Jersey-Cat

Jun 21, 2013

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I assure you, this is very nice work for someone who is not used to drawing Felines, but instead Canines. ^.^ Nice job! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="

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A few small errors I'd like to point out is the body/anatomy work. The nose is far too large for that of a cat, and the eyes look a bit awkward. The ears are the slightest bit too long, and the chest area looks off.
What I really notice to be an issue is the size of the cat itself. Cats are known to be especially sleek, and this drawing here looks like the bodywork of a dog: Muscular and large. I suggest making the back less broad and "curvy," perhaps. The tail is also a bit too thick, but that is definantly fine if you're going for a Persian look.
Outside of this, very well-done! The lighting and shading is done well and efficiently, and expression great for the scene. Great work! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="

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