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Lantinari's Fire

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Was listening to Breaking Benjemin's "Diary Of Jane" and drew this up, after listening to the "as I burn another page, as I look the other way" line. :XD:
Glowly art is fun. :meow:
I'd really like to hear what you guys think of this one. I'm fairly proud of it.

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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I'm not very good at giving critiques, but here I go.

First of all, the vision. I really liked this when I first looked at it. The fire really caught my eye but it seems to be focused on more than Lantinari. Other than that, it's really good and I think it stands out well in your gallery.

For the originality, well, any art that includes an OC is already original, and Lantinari is one of the most original I've seen you make. Your style is also itself unique, as well as how you did the fire, it's fresh and new!

Technique now, and where do I start? I absolutley adore the shading on the face and to be honest, after you look at the fire for a while it appears as if it's actually glowing. The only thing you could improve on in this section is perhaps adding a more detailed background, maybe? Other than that, this is overall a great piece.