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Lantinari's Fire by Mcingake Lantinari's Fire by Mcingake
Was listening to Breaking Benjemin's "Diary Of Jane" and drew this up, after listening to the "as I burn another page, as I look the other way" line. :XD:
Glowly art is fun. :meow:
I'd really like to hear what you guys think of this one. I'm fairly proud of it.

Art and Character (c) Me
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Since no one gives you a Critique, I'll give you one. :meow:

First off the dog, the dog is wonderful as always!

The background is wonderful! I really like how you put black against flame since flames are easier to see at night time.

Next the fire, ah I would say this is my longest part, the flame is pretty good, I would have added specks of ashes flying around in the flame, but not to noticable. I would also would have added a dark blue in it to symbolize power or clamness. Hope this helps next time with your art!

~TFMLuver
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I'm not very good at giving critiques, but here I go.

First of all, the vision. I really liked this when I first looked at it. The fire really caught my eye but it seems to be focused on more than Lantinari. Other than that, it's really good and I think it stands out well in your gallery.

For the originality, well, any art that includes an OC is already original, and Lantinari is one of the most original I've seen you make. Your style is also itself unique, as well as how you did the fire, it's fresh and new!

Technique now, and where do I start? I absolutley adore the shading on the face and to be honest, after you look at the fire for a while it appears as if it's actually glowing. The only thing you could improve on in this section is perhaps adding a more detailed background, maybe? Other than that, this is overall a great piece.
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The-Devious-Wolf Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Lanitari be evil then? :icontrollmorphplz: Yus, use fire to shield you. Works all the time for me-- Er, I mean, keep up the good work! ^^;

( No, I'm not a Firebender! >8U... Or am I? :XD: )
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Mcingake Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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Sparkplug0 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesomeness. :)
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Mcingake Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. C:
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Sparkplug0 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :)
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sharkfreckles Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
I find critiques hard to do, but I can definitely give you some constructive criticism.

First of all, the fire is really well done, and I like how you made the inner flames paler instead of just straight up orange or red.

However, the character seems to be close to the flames. Seeing as fire gives off light, it would most likely cast at least a faint glow on their face, depending on how brightly the fire is burning.

Adding some fiery glow and strong shading would give the piece some atmosphere and make it look a little less flat.

You might want to add a More detailed background, but that's not really necessary.

Other than that, great job!
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Mcingake Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. c:
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sharkfreckles Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012
You're welcome!
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Curious-Crestie Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
ASDFGHKSLHFKSEJ I LOVE THAT SONG SO MUCH. :heart:
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Mcingake Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
xD
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