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Forget It

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It's a crime, you let it happen to me,
Nevermind, I let it happen to you,
I don't mind, forget it, there's nothing to lose,
But my mind, and all the things I wanted...

Everytime I get it, throw it away,
It's a sign, I get it, I wanna stay,
By the time I lose it, I'm not afraid
I'm alive, but I can surely fake it...

How can I believe
When this could hangs over me?
You're the part of me
That I don't want to see...

Forget it, forget it, forget it, forget it, forget it...

There's a place, I see you following me,
Just a taste of all that might come to be,
I'm alone, alone and holding breath, you can breath,
To question every answer coming...

Just fade away,
Please let me stay,
Caught in your way...
Forget it, forget it, forget it, forget it, forget it...
Just fade away,
Please let me stay,
Caught in your way...
Forget it, forget it, forget it, forget it, forget it...

It's a crime, you let it happen to me,
I don't mind, I love it, easy to please,
Nevermind, forget it, just memory,
On a page, inside a spiral notebook...

Just fade away...
Please let me stay...
Caught in your way...
I can live forever here!
Just fade away...
Please let me stay...
Caught in your way...
I can live forever here...


The first test for my new style. This is a new character for a new story! His name is Pearl, and it is scary how well this song fits him.
...Poor Pearl. xD

"Forget It" - Breaking Benjamin
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

Time for another critique on another wonderful work of art!

I see two goals to this drawing and its description: 1. the addition of a new character, and 2. a new style of drawing.

1. Addition of Pearl - Mcingake, I see your collection of characters ever expanding. That's a wonderful sign of imagination, matching up different scenarios, characteristics and appearances for all sorts of characters. It makes each one, even Pearl here, stand out. I have not heard the song in the description before, but if you say it's a close description to Pearl, then I'm excited to see what comes next.

2. New style of drawing - Pearl's appearance has a few new quirks, but also relfects on your overall style up to now. I can see it in the eyes, face and poses that this is a drawing by Mcingake. I do notice a few new things, such as fur detail on the face and body. Or at least this addition makes Pearl look more unique compared to other characters you have drawn. I cannot say anything about its resemblance to animals, since I knew little to none about breeds. But I can truly say, keep up the good work! I like where this is going!