Awake and Alive

Just saw the derp drawing before this, now this is more like it! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/> Such good effects and shading. It gives the perception of moonlight without the moon in the image. You can still recognize where it is by the lighter areas, accurately lined up.

The face can be identified in several moods - anger, determination, vengeance, and more - all of which excellent for this early morning position. In fact, as I critique this, I relate the mood best to be determination. I woke up early this morning with a big plan to accomplish several tasks today like no day before this summer. So I guess this image in its entirety is similar to how I feel.

The focus in this image is pretty good as well. The grass and background are slightly out of focus, to concentrate most of the attention on the animal (what's his/her name?). Very proper, and also makes the animal seem closer to the viewer.

"Sorry for the lineless art spam"? Why apologize? I am completely honest, I actually love the lineless art better than your other works! It brings the models in your images (not just this one) to life. Last I checked people and animals don't have thin black lines surrounding them haha.

Keep up the good work, Ming. If possible, please continue the lineless art. It not only seems fresh, but more realistic! That wins points in this critique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>